General Poetry posted May 14, 2016


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Spare parts needed

Ageing

by persevere

The human motor car
Having travelled from afar
Headlights are failing
Most joints need oiling






Naani writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
A naani has 4 lines. Total numbers of syllables is between 20 to 25. No particular subject but naani is often about human relations or current statements.
-no artwork
-basic editor with two-color presentation (one for background, one for text)


It is inevitable that the however well this body is cared for there will be wear and tear.
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