General Poetry posted May 1, 2016

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Love Poem

It's All About You

by Jonadab Ezerie

Time after time
I have this dream of you
Of what makes you so special
Of those little things about you
That makes you the gem you are.

I dream of your intelligence.
In the things you do and say
Of the gentleness you impart
On to those things you touch.

I dream of your beauty.
The perfection that lines your face
Of your eyes that sparkle
Like 'two golden crystals

I dream of your hair.
I feel each dark, richly long strand of it
Your smooth fair skin
Glowing to affirm its tenderness

I smell your fragrance,
Sweetly fresh as the breath of spring
I see your elegance-
The sure way you carry yourself

I dream of the charm in your smile
The warmth of your tender touch
The soothing tone of your voice dazzles me
And assurance in your eyes

I wake up
Only to see you there
That the comfort you give is real
Is then I desire to know
That secret person in your heart
Who sees wherever you look
And speaks whenever you talk
The silent spirit
That surrounds everything about you

Love Poem Poetry Contest contest entry


In terms of context, the poem reflects the speaker's deep admiration and longing for someone special. The speaker's emotions and thoughts are the poem's focus, and the detailed description of the person reflects the intensity of the speaker's feelings. The poem does not provide specific details about the who, what, where, and when, as the focus is on the emotional and sensory experience of the speaker.
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