Satire Flash Fiction posted April 16, 2016

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Positively Pro for Breast Feeding

Little Buddy Blue Boy

by DonandVicki

Alliterative Flash Fiction Contest Winner 

Little buddy blue boy is a begging for his booby.

"There, there my tiny tit mouse," momma mused.

"There's no reason to raise all this ruckus."

She unbuttoned her blouse, unbound her brassiere and her bountiful buxom bosom bounced forth beautifully.

"See sweetie," she said sweetly.

Her baby's big eyes bulged.

"For lunch munch as much as you must," She cooed.

"But save some for daddyyy !" She sang softly.

Writing Prompt
Write a flash fiction story (less than 500 words) using as much alliteration as possible.

Can be similar to the style of Margaret Atwood's "Rude Ramsay and the Roaring Radishes" or "Princess Prunella and the Purple Peanut".

Alliterative Flash Fiction
Contest Winner


A little satire on the positives of breast feeding. What's good for the baby goose is good for the gander.
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