Spiritual Poetry posted April 5, 2016


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My Pot is Cracked

by TallySally

I Am Not Perfect Contest Winner 

The Lord's in the business of building - sometimes with used materials ...

See Notes for potter's terms
and references


My pot is cracked.
The glue won’t stick.
It flies apart in shards.

An ugly mess
of brokenness,
inside a shattered heart.

Inflated dreams
and crazy schemes,
when I my 'self' had thrown.

My brain won’t spark.
My thoughts are dark.
Down endless halls I roam.

Oppressive gloom,
shut in my tomb,
my ‘self’ don’t recognize.

And here, again,
once more I’ve sinned,
but in me Spirit strives.

It calls to Him.
He knows my name.
Remembers, when I can’t.

Then of His own,
He leads me home.
Re-‘news’ my soul again.

Scoops up the lot,
crushes my pot.
He grinds it into dust.

Pours water in,
beats smooth, and then
He forms a ball from mush.

Centered wheel-head,
fly-wheel He treads.
Pan fills with splashing slip.

Skillful hands throw.
Perfect form grows.
Pull, coil, cut, trim and lift.

Shaped in His form,
as if re ‘born’,
resting inside His Grace.

By Master’s hands,
Great Artisan,
He bathes me in rich glaze.

In kiln so hot,
all dross burned off,
remains a dif’rent shape.

Vitrified skin,
Bright, glassy sheen,
nothing now permeates.

Surprised, I find
old scars still line,
Now shining like stained glass!

A masterpiece!
He’s refined me!
Re ‘formed’ all of my past.

He lovingly,
Makes heir of me.
Transmutes my lump of clay.

My pot is whole
My spirit knows
He holds me ‘til that Day.

So until then,
Safe in His hand,
I can’t be snatched away.



Writing Prompt
Write a poem about a flaw that you see in yourself.

I Am Not Perfect
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General Terms:

A pottery wheel is a machine that spins clay.
Throw comes from an old English term meaning to twist and describes the activity of making a pot on a potter's wheel.
A foot pedal turns the wheel-head.
Foot pedals are also known as fly-wheels or treadles.
A lump of clay must be perfectly centered on the fly-wheel head to turn without flying off.
Treadling spins the wheel-head.
A splash pan catches slip.
Slip, a watery slurry that spins out of clay, is a waste product.
Coiling is adding a ring of rolled dough to extend the vessel.
Pull, coil, cut, trim, lift and push are terms for manipulating, adding or decreasing mass, and forcing shape.
A glaze is a substance, applied to the inner or outer surface of a pot, which vitrifies in the kiln - meaning that it forms a glassy skin, which fuses with the earthenware and makes it impermeable to liquids.
Glaze transforms terracotta into fine ceramic.
A kiln is a furnace in which pottery is fired.
Some history of potter's wheels was obtained from:

http://www.historyworld.net/wrldhis/PlainTextHistories.asp?historyid=ab98
The potter's wheel: 3000 BC
and
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Treadle

Bible references:

Isaiah 64:8
Yet you, Lord, are our Father. We are the clay, you are the potter; we are all the work of your hand.

Numbers 5:17
Then he shall take some holy water in a clay jar and put some dust from the tabernacle floor into the water.

Job 10:9
Remember that you molded me like clay. Will you now turn me to dust again?

Jeremiah 18:4
But the pot he was shaping from the clay was marred in his hands; so the potter formed it into another pot, shaping it as seemed best to him.
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