General Poetry posted March 25, 2016 Chapters:  ...46 47 -48- 49... 


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A song about young love in high school

A chapter in the book Prosetry

Young Love

by jusylee72

They say that I'm too young
To understand true love
and know exactly how it feels

They say it isn't true
I'm only passing through
a stage of life that isn't really

but if it isn't real and isn't true
Then all these silly things I do
are causing me to go astray.

Then you must listen to me know
as I say

You were young once
You remember
How it felt to hold his hand

You were young once
Don't forget how
You thought he was a man

And you changed the way you walked to math
Hoping he would cross your path
and notice how you changed your hair

And in that moment
That one moment.......

You were young once
You remember
when he finally asked your name

You were young once
Don't forget how
Your heart never felt the same

And he called you up
and you talked for hours
and he even bought you flowers

And in that moment
That sweet moment.......

Your were young once
you remember
when you saw him with THAT Girl

You were young once
Don't forget how
He really changed your world

And the tears came down
and you stayed inside
listening to the radio

but in that moment
That one moment...

And even though it didn't last
and all of this is in your past
a silly stage that you were going through

But in that moment
Yes, that moment
Love was true.



Laughter writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a poem of any type that makes your reader laugh.


I am a choir teacher at a high school. One day one of my freshmen girls was looking sad. When I asked her what was wrong she sighed and said, "Love" I went home and wrote this song for here that night. Adults like it we laugh at ourselves when we hear it , then shed a tear at the end because we know how it felt.
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