Biographical Poetry posted December 28, 2015 Chapters:  ...125 126 -127- 128... 


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ABAB Quatrains with Refrains

A chapter in the book Family

Electro Shock Therapy

by Treischel



I didn't know that she checked herself in.
Informed by a phone call while I was workin',
Drove to the hospital, parked in the ramp,
Five dollars a visit with ticket stamp.

I asked her, "What happened? Why are you here?"
She said that "Nausea overcame fear".
Electro Shock Treatments are very tuff,
But she convinced me, she's had enough.

I didn't know,
How it would go.

They pushed her away on gurney that day.
I wished her the best, as I had no say.
As she disappeared through room's double door,
I wasn't sure what was true anymore.

Ten treatments required to take effect,
A mood shifting goal she chose to elect.
So every day I would visit the site,
One time at noon, and the other at night.

I didn't know,
How it would go.

Every time was the same horrible game,
As she searched hard to find someone to blame.
She would cry, and then say "What have you done?"
And I would explain, "It wasn't ME, hun."

Then she'd cry, and we'd hug until I leave.
Her memory gone. So hard to believe.
This all repeated again and again,
A constant review of how, what, and when.

I didn't know,
How it would go.

On fourth treatment session, first time I saw
A chunk of her tongue was bitten and raw.
I asked her, "What happened?" She didn't know.
Was deep on left side, where it didn't show.

We showed the nurses, who hadn't a clue.
They said, "The doctors will know what to do."
I'm not sure anything ever was said.
Everyone seemed to ignore it instead.

I didn't know,
How it would go.

Eventually it came to an end.
No longer visits did I have to spend.
I got back my wife and her tongue had healed.
Results of the effort were soon revealed.

Well, after ten treatments nausea was gone,
But manic depression kept going on.
Resulting from all of that stress and strain-
Her short-term memory left her brain.

And now I know,
How it did go.








This is the event from my perspective. Of course, my wife's would be entirely different, if she could remember. It happened in 1994. As I said, it didn't cure the Bipolar, but did eliminate the chronic nausea. I must note, about her reaction, that in 1993 she was hospitalized 4 times, twice I had her involuntarily committed, once she committed herself, and once the county committed her. She became deathly afraid of going into another hospital. That's why I was very surprised when she elected to undergo this treatment. She told me that the nausea was so bad, she was ready to do anything to get rid of it. 1993 was probably the worse time of our lives, but that's another story.

This poem is written in simple abab rhymed quatrains with a variable 10 syllable meter and a repeated refrain.

The photograph was taken and modified by the author himself.
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