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Bird Woman Picture Challenge

A chapter in the book Christine's Poems

The Girl in Red

by Chrissy710

I wonder what you thought about when painting this Lightink
What gave you inspiration such, and how this made you think.
With canvas blank you started out, t'was once so clean and white
But finished with this work of art, so beautiful and bright.

Your dedicated brush strokes do, bring life into this girl
Her form continues to set free, an everlasting swirl.
Like Chakras colours branching wide, enclosing all around
Her pensive look does capture us, she's really quite profound.

The curves and curls they all connect, her inner soul you've seen
Now bring this woman to us all, our thoughts for you to glean.
Just what we see and what we write, to make her come alive
Will be our quest this very day, what will our thoughts derive.

I see her reaching up so high, to hold a branch quite still
A bird who sits upon this branch, is mesmerized at will.
Her gentle stare just keeps him safe, he knows she'll do no harm
He is like us just so engrossed, and captured by her charm.

So with those thoughts that are just mine, I hope I've seen the light
Now place her in this challenge field, upon this very night.
Her image now will always be, engraved inside my head
And of what stories we will write, about this girl in red

Christine



Recognized


This is my Picture Challenge for BirdWoman by Lightink. What a lovely painting and I hope I have done her Justice. I encourage you all to read all the other challenge poems with this same image and Thank everyone most sincerely for reading mine

As this probably be my last post until the Christmas Festivities are over. May I take this opportunity to wish each and everyone of the FanStory writers
a Very Merry Xmas and have a Safe and Happy New Year and Thank you everyone for making me so welcome to Fan Story and for all your encouragement and support
Cheers to you all Christine
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