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A Concrete Poem

A chapter in the book Little Poems

The Star

by Treischel



I
am
here
so high
in the sky
A new star
hanging above
Bethlehem town
A star, expressing God's love
My light heralds the coming of a Newborn King
Now follow this star to the humble site of the One who means everything
Raise up your voices high, hark the Angel's song
A child wearing a heavenly crown
was born at last
Find a manger
Come along
to worship
Him here
where
go
I







O Holy Night and Silent Night inspired poem.

This is a Concrete or Shape Poem
A Concrete Poem (also known as a Shape Poem) is one where the text takes on a form that is a recognizable image.
In this poem I tried to achieve the shape of the Star of Bethlehem.
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