Biographical Poetry posted November 3, 2015 | Chapters: | ...119 120 -121- 122... |
A LyriCat Poem
A chapter in the book Family
Living with Chronic Pain
by Treischel
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Poem of the Month contest entry
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My wife, Karen, lives with constant chronic pain, due to arthritis in her lower back and knees. Lately, her knee pain has overtaken the back pain, as her left knee has deteriorated to bone-on-bone. She has already had two unsuccessful back surgeries, but now she needs a total knee replacement. She is scheduled for that next week. As her spouse, there is little I can do but to offer help and support. I wish I could heal her, but I can't. Let's pray, this is successful, and maybe even help her back.
This poem is a LyriCat .
Congratulations are due for a newly invented verse form by I am Cat, a fellow FanStorian, which she calls a LyriCat. (See 'Refreshing My Soul', posted on 29 October).
A LyriCat has a syllable count of:
7, 5, 5 , 5, 5, 5, 9, 5,
and the rhyme scheme of each individual stanza is:
a, b, c, b, d, e, F, e.
No set rhythm is prescribed. It has a 3 stanza minimum and the 9 syllable line (F) in each stanza is a repeating line.
This photograph was taken by the Author himself of his wife, then modified for effect.
Pays
one point
and 2 member cents. This poem is a LyriCat .
Congratulations are due for a newly invented verse form by I am Cat, a fellow FanStorian, which she calls a LyriCat. (See 'Refreshing My Soul', posted on 29 October).
A LyriCat has a syllable count of:
7, 5, 5 , 5, 5, 5, 9, 5,
and the rhyme scheme of each individual stanza is:
a, b, c, b, d, e, F, e.
No set rhythm is prescribed. It has a 3 stanza minimum and the 9 syllable line (F) in each stanza is a repeating line.
This photograph was taken by the Author himself of his wife, then modified for effect.
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