Biographical Poetry posted November 3, 2015 Chapters:  ...119 120 -121- 122... 


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A LyriCat Poem

A chapter in the book Family

Living with Chronic Pain

by Treischel




What can any soul-mate do,
Lend or lose or gain,
When their loved one is
Wrapped in searing pain,
But offer support --
Words just seem so weak --
While her joints burn, and the pain leaves her
Unable to speak?

It's helplessness that prevails
In the healthy mind,
With hers ensnared in
Illness so unkind.
Its pain beats the brain,
Making spirits sink,
While her joints burn, and the pain leaves her
Unable to think.

You can see her noble face
Straining to survive,
Movement with purpose,
Bravely forced to strive
To do simple tasks,
Groaning all the while,
While her joints burn, and the pain leaves her
Unable to smile.

You can see it in her eyes,
Filled with massive hurt,
So red and bleary,
Forced to be alert.
So hard to focus.
So hard to align,
While her joints burn, and the pain leaves her
Unable to shine.

A sheen of pain surrounds her,
Constant company,
An aura of green,
Without sympathy.
Intense the color,
Hurting but alive,
While her joints burn, and the pain leaves her
Unable to thrive.

As the suffering goes on,
We do what we can.
Seeking some relief
Since the pain began.
A heavy burden
To bear day by day,
While her joints burn, and the pain leaves her
Left only to pray.



Poem of the Month contest entry

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My wife, Karen, lives with constant chronic pain, due to arthritis in her lower back and knees. Lately, her knee pain has overtaken the back pain, as her left knee has deteriorated to bone-on-bone. She has already had two unsuccessful back surgeries, but now she needs a total knee replacement. She is scheduled for that next week. As her spouse, there is little I can do but to offer help and support. I wish I could heal her, but I can't. Let's pray, this is successful, and maybe even help her back.

This poem is a LyriCat .
Congratulations are due for a newly invented verse form by I am Cat, a fellow FanStorian, which she calls a LyriCat. (See 'Refreshing My Soul', posted on 29 October).

A LyriCat has a syllable count of:
7, 5, 5 , 5, 5, 5, 9, 5,
and the rhyme scheme of each individual stanza is:
a, b, c, b, d, e, F, e.
No set rhythm is prescribed. It has a 3 stanza minimum and the 9 syllable line (F) in each stanza is a repeating line.

This photograph was taken by the Author himself of his wife, then modified for effect.
Pays one point and 2 member cents.


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