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A Sestina Sonnet

A chapter in the book Little Poems

Golf Course Sign

by Treischel



Directions on this chiseled stone
Create a setting very strange
Where groups of purple leaves have grown
Nearby the golf course driving range.

Where benches placed upon the range
Are visible above what's grown
Around the words upon the stone
That steel spikes are considered strange.

But then again, it's not so strange,
For greens are never made of stone
And solid cleats may ruin the range
Of cultured grasses that were grown.

Is it so strange highlights are grown
'Round driving range's message stone?






Shown here is a pretty well maincured and decorated stone sign at the River Oaks Golf Course in Cottage Grove, Minnesota, where I recently played in a tournament. It stands right in front of the practise driving range. On it is a reminder that steel spikes, or cleats , are no longer welcome on the course. Here I'm just speculating on how pretty that stone sign is.

This poem is a Sestina Sonnet.
A Sestina is unusual in that it doesn't use rhyme, but instead uses the same words repeated in differnet sequences for each stanza. Normally, the Sestina has 6 repeated words sequences over six verses and a closing Tercet that uses all six words. In order to accomodate a Sonnet, it has been modified to have 4 words ending each line of a Quatrain repeated over three verses, with a closing cuplet that incorporates the four key words. So, if you identify the four words with the letters A,B,C, and D, the word sequence for the Sonnet is:

ABCD DCAB BADC (BC)(DA)

For this poem, I chose the 4 Words as:
A - stone
B - strange
C - grown
D -range

This photograoh was taken by the author himself on July 11, 2015.
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