General Fiction posted August 6, 2015


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Bruce is always there

Big Brother

by Gunner Lil


Emily, four, was left alone in the backyard by older brother Bruce.
Kicking the large, colorful ball across the yard, then chasing after
it was only fun for so long.

Frustrated, Emily took aim, kicked, and the ball flew over the chain
linked fence, landing in the creek.

Held back by the fence, Emily watched as the ball floated away. Crying,
she sat on the ground feeling helpless.

Bruce tapped Emily's shoulder, handed her the ball and asked, "Is this
yours?"

Emily smiled, took the ball, and hugged Bruce, and said, "My Hero."

"Sis, I'll always be there for you."



100 Word Dash writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Take flash fiction to the extreme. Can you tell a complete story in just 100 words. If so, this is your opportunity to shine. The story can be about any subject you wish, creative approaches are of course encouraged. All stories must have the following: Main Character, Setting, Conflict, Resolution.

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