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A Fusion Sonnet

A chapter in the book Little Poems

Humanity

by Treischel


Humanity is all about.
The numbers cannot be denied.
The trend is on an upward glide,
Where our resources soon collide,
And there are some things we can't do without.
Like any fresh water supply.
Our reservoirs are going dry.
We soon may just be getting by.
How long will it take for food to run out?
Is our survival in some long-term doubt?

We seem a very resilient lot,
And some resources are renewable.
We can learn conservation and practice
All the ways to consume within reason.

Humanity is all about.
Our intelligence has no real limit
When inspiration resides within it.
Add in our science and necessity,
We'll find ways to save our society.
For the need is great to forge the right route,
And there are some things we can't do without.





At least one can hope.

This is a Fusion Sonnet.
It was invented by the Greek poet, Yannis Livadas (born in 1969), and popularized by Sonnet Modal. I was drawn to this one by the tripple rhymes imbedded in it.

This falls under the auspicies of the Modern Sonnet genre. As such, it breaks several Sonnet rules. Most notibly, it has 21 lines rather than the the typical 14. The fusion comes from blending in 4 lines of free verse at lines 11 through 14. It has a strict structure and rhyme scheme, but is more flexible in the area of meter. Here are the complex rules:

14 line Poem followed by a half sonnet of 7 lines acting as a coda or tail to add additional stability to the poem. No particular meter is followed fusing it with the modern free verse style.

First Fourteen Lines:
Same Rhyme in 1st,5th,9th & 10th Lines.
Same Rhyme in 2nd,3rd & 4th Lines.
Same Rhyme in 6th,7th & 8th lines.
Rhetorical questions in 9th & 10th lines.
Negative and pessimistic note in the first 10 lines.
Free verse carrying Optimistic Tone in 11th, 12th,13 & 14th Lines.
Volta gradually through 9th, 10th and 11th lines.

Next Seven Lines:-The Half Sonnet acting as a coda.
Same Rhyme in 16th and 17th lines.
Same Rhyme in 18th and 19th lines.
Volta in the 20th line.

For this poem the rhymes scheme, as laid out above is:
A1, b,b,b, A2, c,c,c, (4 lines free verse)----A1, d,d,e,e,A2, where the capital letters indicate repeated lines.

The picture was taken by the author himself at the Minnesota State Fair in August, 2014.
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