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A 12 Line Exhortation

A chapter in the book Little Poems

Find Joy

by Treischel



Find Joy!
Enjoy the finer things of life.
Reduce and minimize the strife.
The opportunities are rife
For doing well.
So cast a spell,
And see the chances that arise,
They're sitting right before your eyes --
The simple things the world supplies
When you step out,
And look about.
Find Joy!







Yes, get out there and enjoy life.

This poem is a 12 Line Exhortation.
This poem is a 12 Line Exhortation, a format that I created. A 12 Line Exhortation is a poem with 12 lines, starting and ending with a 2 syllable line that caries an exhortation, like; Get up!, Move on! Go jump! The whole syllable structure is:
2/8/8/8/4/4/8/8/8/4/4/2.
There is also a fixed rhyme scheme of:
AbbbaacccddA, where the capital letters are repeated lines.

I researched poetry types with 12 Lines to see what they are called. I found a group of poems called 12 Lines. But they are basically unstructured. I wanted some specific structure. I wanted a poem with 3 consecutive lines of rhyme, that played off 8/4/2 syllable counts and was positive in spirit. So I created this format and called it 12 Line Exhortation. I don't think this format previously exists, as far as I know.

This photograph was taken by the author himself diuring a scarecrow exhibit at the Minnesota Arboretum located in Chanhassen, on Octrober 16, 2014.

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