Self Improvement Poetry posted June 10, 2015

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Seeing the newness of color in me

As I Dance

by LoannaLois

As I dance
I see
the colors above my head
swirling together in ribbons.
Will the rainbow become my window
into my tomorrow?
Pull me in, colors of my life:
the blues, the reds, the yellows.
Show me I am not without color;
no shades of grey and black for me!
For I lived in that world of black.
I prayed for hope as pink as a rose.
I needed grace as violet as His robe.
I waited for new life as green as new grass.
I thank Him now for my life of color-
and I pull the ribbons around me
as I dance.

A Rainbow writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a poem of any kind about a rainbow.


I look at my life like this....before and after color was added again.
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