Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted May 6, 2015 Chapters:  ...38 39 -40- 41... 

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Human Emotion

A chapter in the book Act of Endurance

A Tear


Words voiced from box clear grip heart, strikes notes stated silent pox, appearing in right eye mud fox heard thought frightening views news.

Dot the shape swirling becomes a larger drop, flickers to rape horror thrills wobbling to rock, escape built anger not all watered this mound.

I'm indeed a maker of a tear not a full creator, hurt a rat this scheme sunk I found by a baker, dripped a faker hatred twink a side of a cheek.

Actuality is a tear real it's constructed in fact, fragments victims pain given impact, realizing actions to come served my set fate the contact.

Enough fun had a tear off a cheek side big fall, dive fast twirled leaps to hear nothing, depart this gem from near my chin there falling to dot.

Crown self worn to an unrighteousness, falls down a teardrop lining it my body, came splat grown to splash cut by a deed mention theory.

Floor broke a tiny drip to doom pieces, zoom back into the air travels distances, hit its boom this leak splatters into many countless beads.

A ball exposed free to do stopped it by none, dropping it ventures by call leaves its pit, from hid hall tear to answer sent sorrow given rage.


A tear seen honesty to its an act of endurance, broken one by the wet ball rooted to the heart. Soul is ripped in pain, coming its water a tear.
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