Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted May 6, 2015 Chapters:  ...43 44 -51- 52... 


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A chapter in the book Act Of Endurance

A Tear

by TPAC

Life it without limbs appears to mud pox unbox;
hit words out a faceless form tone note thrust heart its harsh touch:
awaits in one eye fox, hear news echoing a pain reaction in me.

Tiny dot shape rape form flickering drop;
inside changes whole body growing faster:
escape hurt out eye wobbling angers see a mound pile a rock.

I'm indeed its maker of this creature evil schemes at bite not sole creator;
yell cry of a baker:
sink faker on cheek a puddle.

Events in a life shock firm laid in actuality bring its fact;
from an impact hell's rage this horror ripping:
realize cruel act fate intentions believably lived direct connect.

Time up sent a drip small off cheek call to depart chin down;
leap open air from left eye a bright gem:
likened shape a wall within twinkles dot.

A self entitled crown factors strike the ear, freed a limbless toad fact in shear misery; firm set carries fear unrighteousness the full lined body:
outward burst found guilty.

Demonic angry drip spinning drop lower floor traveling zoom boom;
doom destroys a small dot splatters into pieces in parts:
roll beads touching it things multiply pain.

Any felt tear brought from a nightmares dark pit exposed as a ball to go free will is fallen;
reflect this harm that carries:
giving a call, stop by none answer sorrow.



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A tear rooted to each broken heart, responds to emotions convey honesty, immediately wet ball; flow of undeniable: water.
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