Horror and Thriller Flash Fiction posted May 4, 2015

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50 word story

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by michaelcahill

50 words or less story Contest Winner 

Caught, in a sea cave!
My foot wedged between rocks. The tide is talking now.
Entrance … under water.
How high will it rise? If I remained trapped … over my head.
I'm guessing there'll be air pockets.
I'm free! Water leveling off … two feet to spare.

Breathing normally ... I'm okay.




Writing Prompt
Can you tell a complete story to thrill or frighten in fifty words or less?

50 words or less story
Contest Winner


Word count 50 by hand.
Please feel free to offer instructions on how to indicate pauses. I'm not sure if I'm using elipses properly. Maybe I need some dashes? :))

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