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An Ampeletum with Closing Couplet
A chapter in the book Little Poems
The Gift of Color
by Treischel
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Flowers provide such beauty and color to the world, as well as their fragrance. What a wonderful gift to the world they are. So much so that Genesis should have added a verse just for them. Maybe it would read something like this poem.
This poem is an Ampeletum.
I was introduced to it by fellow FanStorian tfawcus.
The Ampeletum was created several years ago by FanStorian JeJo. The name is derived from "ampel-" denoting vines and "-etum" meaning a grove or garden (as in Arboretum). Thus, the name signifies the way rhymes keep twisting around, coming back to life.
It consists of four stanzas with a rhyme scheme of:
Abcb, bded, fgcg, Aehe where capital A is an exact repeated line.
There are just six syllables per line and any meter can be used.
My poem is written mainly in iambic trimeter with minor variations, as was Tony's (tfawcus). I added the closing couplet in order to capture a Genesis effect - "and He saw that it was good" - type of statement.
This photograph was taken by the author in July, 2014 at a local shopping center that had many flower displays.
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and 2 member cents. This poem is an Ampeletum.
I was introduced to it by fellow FanStorian tfawcus.
The Ampeletum was created several years ago by FanStorian JeJo. The name is derived from "ampel-" denoting vines and "-etum" meaning a grove or garden (as in Arboretum). Thus, the name signifies the way rhymes keep twisting around, coming back to life.
It consists of four stanzas with a rhyme scheme of:
Abcb, bded, fgcg, Aehe where capital A is an exact repeated line.
There are just six syllables per line and any meter can be used.
My poem is written mainly in iambic trimeter with minor variations, as was Tony's (tfawcus). I added the closing couplet in order to capture a Genesis effect - "and He saw that it was good" - type of statement.
This photograph was taken by the author in July, 2014 at a local shopping center that had many flower displays.
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