General Poetry posted April 10, 2015 Chapters:  ...218 219 -220- 221... 


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A Diatelle

A chapter in the book Little Poems

Hillside Shadows

by Treischel




Dark
and Light
contrast sight
Abstract Shadows
seen when sun shines bright
that paints where the focus narrows
on the slanted hillsides, or bent meadows
black images forming, making patterns quite stark
of squares and circles, some lines and arrows
even strange birds, or wheel-barrows
created in black and white
outlined hallows
pure delight
we might
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Bright sunlight shines the image of a tree onto a hillside making abstract patterns. I caught my eye and imagination.

Limited punctuation and the capitalization is intentional.

This poem is a Diatelle.
A Diatelle is a pattern poem that has a set syllable count and a set rhyme. When done correctly, it forms a stunning pattern that is an eyecatcher. The rhyme scheme helps create some beautiful verse as well. The longer lines in the middle give plenty of room for creativity.

The syllable count is:

1-2-3-4-6-8-10-12-10-8-6-4-3-2-1,

The rhyme scheme is:

abbcbccaccbcbba.

This picture was taken by the author himself along the Mississippi River bluffs just outside of St. Paul on March 28, 2015.

It is usually best displayed centered.
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