Biographical Poetry posted April 5, 2015 Chapters:  ...104 105 -106- 107... 


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8-6 Meter Quatrains

A chapter in the book Family

The Colorado Rake

by Treischel

On Colorado mountain top,
My home adrift with leaves,
Chinook high winds that just won't stop
Create a blust'ry breeze.

The winds so strong they shake my home,
And crack my window panes.
It blows so hard I fear to roam.
It's nasty when it rains.

But when it stops, it gets so dry,
The winds are like a rake
That sweeps the yard and makes leaves fly
On journeys they will take.

A wisp of wind will lift them high,
On frantic flights they go
Without as much as said "goodbye"
They leave Colorado.

Among the clouds they flip and float,
Fluttering to and fro,
On thermal winds, so high, remote,
The paths the eagles know.

As from my window I would watch.
Blown away to Kansas
Were thirty bagsful in a swatch,
Leaves of living canvas.

I've often wondered where they went,
And where they would touch down.
This autumn gift of foliage sent,
Seems like it's Kansas bound.

Drifting over old Dodge City
Then on to Wichita.
Yardwork done, I felt no pity,
No link to what I saw.

Some unsuspecting citizen
Gets dumped upon his lawn
A Colorado denizen
One windy Winfield dawn.




I lived in Colorado Springs in a house I had built by a local contractor on Cheyenne Mountain. This is a picture of that house. This picture is grainy because I had to take a picture of an old picture. You can see it was surrounded by Scrub Oak. So there were lots of leaves in the fall, but I never had to rake, as that house often got such fierce winds I thought the house was being ripped off the hill. Gusts would actually cause a cracking sound in the windows. I often wondered where the leaves went.

Chinook Winds - according to Wikipedia, Chinook winds or simply Chinooks, are high winds in the interior West of North America, where the Canadian Prairies and Great Plains meet the Rocky Mountain ranges. A strong Chinook can make snow one foot deep almost vanish in one day. The snow partly melts and partly evaporates in the dry wind. On rare occasions, Chinook winds generated on the eastern slope of the Rocky Mountains have reached or passed the Mississippi River.

Denizen - a plant or animal that inhabits a particular region.

I recently was asked to Judge a poetry contest called "Kansas Voices" sponsored by the Winfield Arts and Humanities Council. So, like my leaves, my poetic experience has traveled into Winfield, or so the link I imagined here in this poem.

The poem is simple abab rhymed quatrains in an 8-6 meter,

The original picture was taken by the author in the fall of 1986. I do miss that house. It was at an elevation of 7,000 feet above sea level, and 1,000 feet above Colorado Springs.

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