Self Improvement Poetry posted January 26, 2015


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A metaphor for a difficult,impossible challenge.

Jagged Mountain

by LoannaLois

Jagged mountain
Why so high?
Dare I attempt the climb?
Or shall I linger here?
Your height
Does frighten
And intrigue
But
Not quite enough.
Perhaps the timing
Could be better.
Or perhaps,
I don't attempt
Because
I
Will
Fail...
And
I
Will
Fall.

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