Writing Poetry posted January 12, 2015


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The most deadliest thing in this world is ourselves.

Already Gone

by themundanegirl

I'm drowning,
An everlasting void
Claiming its residence inside of me,
I gasp for air,
But no one hears me,
Does anyone care?
I'm dying,
Can't catch my breath
Slowly suffocating,
When will this be over?
Please someone save me!
Still, silence,
I fight,
Clawing at the surface,
Praying that someone,
Anyone,
Would notice,
No one does,
I try to scream, "Help!"
But he won't let me,
"You're worthless," he whispers,
"Weak," he continues,
"No one loves you," he adds,
"Give up," he taunts,
Poisoning my mind with doubt,
Until, finally I stop fighting,
Letting the sorrow consume me,
Slowly slipping away to nothing,
You try to help,
Try to save me,
But it won't work,
It's too late,
You're too late,
I'm already gone.



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