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An Ottava Rima

A chapter in the book Little Poems

Family Ties

by Treischel


The ties that bind exist in more than blood,
For shared experience comes into play.
While parent's influence is understood,
It all combines with things we do and say
In families, where all is well and good,
And bonds abound that never fade away.
These lives that grew together at the start
Exist unchanged once lives have grown apart.

For brother's bonds are stronger than hard steel,
From mutual shared play and punishment
That served to form emotions that they feel,
Encouraged by their home environment,
And pushed by much parental hope appeal
To reach the highest goal accomplishment.
These men, now formed in common cauldron's fire,
Have gone on separate routes their fates require.

Although their paths in time and space diverge,
And one has passed into the great beyond,
Yet still their underlying spirits merge
In true unbreakable brotherly bond.
Where individualities emerge,
The core relationships of each respond
To the persistent pull of family group --
In an undeniable four man troop.





This poem is dedicated to my brothers. The picture is of the four living brothers (top left to right: Joe, Chuck. Lower left is Dick. The one siting on the right is me) of five (Robert died in 1947 at age 2, before I was born). This photograph was taken several years ago, and since then my brother, Chuck, died of ALS.

This Poem is an Ottava Rima.
This poem is a Ottava Rima. It is a poem of Italian origin first introduced by Giovanni Boccaccio around 1350.
The Ottava Rima stanza in English consists of eight iambic lines, usually iambic pentameters. Each stanza consists of three alternate rhymes and one double rhyme, following the:
a-b-a-b-a-b-c-c pattern. There is no limit on the number of stanzas, and often was used in long epic poems.

This photograph was taken by my wife at my brother, Richard's back yard
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