Humor Poetry posted December 5, 2014


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This is a sarcastic poem about the way my daughters treat me

Just One Lucky Mother

by Sueswrite

I Am Not Perfect Contest Winner 
I own a star that is set in stone,
That is walked on by only two.
The name engraved says, " Mom", alone.
How lucky I am. I never knew.

You see, these two were born to me.
They have grown to be adults.
It has taken years for me to see.
How lucky I am, the target of insults.

All this time, I thought I had failed.
Because my faults are never forgotten.
Each time the knife gets deeper impaled,
I should be smiling, when reminded I'm rotten.

I guess I'm just one lucky mother.
Who raised two girls to perfection.
Thank God they've got each other,
To strengthen their, "Hatred affection"!

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Instead of getting upset when my girls say mean comments, I wrote this as a sarcastic "Heads up". Maybe they'll get the message.
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