Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted December 4, 2014 Chapters:  ...190 191 -192- 193... 


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A Katie21 Poem

A chapter in the book Little Poems

Kids Today

by Treischel




Kids Today
don't
go out
to play.

They just sit
all day
in front
of
electronic
devices,

locked
in
video games.







This was the scene this Thanksgiving - the audlt upstairs visiting, the kids downstairs playiny on the Wii. In my day, the kids would be playing ping-pong, tag, or hide and seek.

This poem is a Katie21.
AKatie21 poem is a free verse poem that keys off word count versus syllable count. It must contain exactly 21 words. It can rhyme or not, be about any subject, and punctuation is optional, and skinny stanza style is optional as well.
Skinny stanza style is writing one word per line.

This photograph was taken by the author at my son's,Sean's, house on November 27, 2014.
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