Self Improvement Poetry posted November 17, 2014

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Learning to review

by sandramitchell

I've often viewed reviewer's views of work
And wondered at the wonder of their words
And where some were so wise it was a way
Of helpfulness not hindrance as some say

I'm in awe of authors' authenticity
As their pens then pepper paper pleasantly
And literal links are littered languidly
While connecting conversations candidly

Well, I wish I was as worldly with my words
With alliteration natural when it's heard
But every time I try it sounds absurd
I guess no one can say that I'm a nerd!


Have I just 'mastered' alliteration??? Now let's look at the
'assonance', :( I'll get there one day!! lol!
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