General Poetry posted November 10, 2014


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To scout around~ a welcome peak.

Firecrackers will do

by Johnny-artist

As a test with fire~ purity to find
Hope to rest upon one's chest~ trust with poise
frigid steel steadily hoisted.

Hey man~ at the top of the Eiffel Tower
A regard to visit down
down
down
down
To reward a fresh scene~ an engaging celebration
Hey man~ not being wasted.

Due~ as with firecrackers there are *snaps*
Those displays of authority
Such acts of power
One's ears pierced~ a sparky- diamond boss
Wonders to behold a charming message
A charming message~ not a lost art form.

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