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Interlinked Tercets

A chapter in the book Little Poems

Red Sky

by Treischel



When sky turns red
It's often said
The weather can be told

A Red sky Night
Will bring delight
With stars a shining bold

Take as warning
Red in morning
May bring both wet and cold

It's often true
For what to do
Take note, both young and old





My version of the old sailor's adage -
Red sky at night,
sailor's delight.
Red sky in morning
Sailor's warning

This poem is an interlinked suite of Tercets, which are three line versed poems. The first two lines of each verse rhyme with each other, while all the verses are interlinked by a momo-rhymed third line that carries through to the entire poem. This provides a rhyme scheme of:
aab ccb ddb eeb
The meter for each verse is: 4-4-6 syllables.

This is an evening sky that is one of Author's photographs taken at Lake Phalen in May, 2013.
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