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Ottava Rima

A chapter in the book Little Poems

Autumn's Neighborhood

by Treischel



Our neighborhoods are draped in colors new
with canopies of beautiful bright leaves,
displayed there as the cars go driving through,
A tableau every Autumn sweetly weaves.
The boulevards upon which trees all grew,
now cradle us with arches there achieved,
which now provide kaleidoscopic scenes
that mingle reds and oranges with the greens.

And OH, this is a lovely time of year!
A perfect time to be out and about.
There's crispness in the air. The skies are clear.
It's time to leave the buildings and get out
enjoying ambience that's present here.
The effort is worthwhile without a doubt.
Go walk a crunching, color-coated path,
or jump a pile to take a leafy bath.

I love this pleasing season's pretty sights!
No other time of year has so much grace,
with hues that carry such intense highlights,
as vivid vistas end up every place,
while birds prepare for migratory flights,
and falling leaves fill every empty space.
These blessings give a positive report.
My long lament -- "This season is too short".




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The avenues in St. Paul, Minnesota have trees planted on the boulevards. The branches reach across to form a leafy archway. At this time of year, their colors are spectacular. Thus the inspiration for this poem.

This poem is a Ottava Rima. It is a poem of Italian origin first introduced by Giovanni Boccaccio around 1350.
The Ottava Rima stanza in English consists of eight iambic lines, usually iambic pentameters. Each stanza consists of three alternate rhymes and one double rhyme, following the:
a-b-a-b-a-b-c-c pattern. There is no limit on the number of stanzas, and often was used in long epic poems.

The author took this photograph at Fairmont and Victoria street on October 17, 2014.

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