Family Poetry posted September 8, 2014

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Watching a saint. ( in five lines; a Gogyoshi)

The Caretaker

by LoannaLois

The caretaker scurries from kitchen to bath.

She wipes tired hands on her jeans.

Along with a prayer

while she pins back her hair

in her soup she dumps onions and beans.

Write a Gogyoshi poem writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a Gogyoshi poem. Gogyoshi is a poem written in five lines. Writing a poem in five lines is its only rule. (no syllable counting needed) The content of gogyohshi is free, its themes are chosen by the poet.


God bless the caretakers of the world...if you are one, bless you. If you know one, thank them.
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