General Poetry posted July 4, 2014 Chapters:  ...164 165 -166- 167... 


Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
Quatern

A chapter in the book Little Poems

Tree Swallow on a Rail

by Treischel


Tree Swallow rests upon a rail
Observing traffic passing by
He puffs his chest and shakes his tail
A handsome fellow, you can't deny

There was a local park nearby
Tree Swallow rests upon a rail
He didn't even try to fly
While all around pursuits prevail

He sat right by a hiking trail
This pretty fellow wasn't shy
Tree Swallow rests upon a rail
A quite engaging little guy

His colors really catch the eye
Translucent blue in bright detail
I wished him luck, then said goodbye
Tree Swallow rests upon a rail






A Tree Swallow sits perched on an Ornate Railing near a Park walking trail. It sat there unperturbed by hikers passing by. In fact, it sang to a few. I took his picture and watched for a while. He was still there as I moved on.

This poem is a quatern.
A Quatern is a poem consisting of four quatrains, where the first line of the poem ripples through each stanza. It becomes the second line of the second stanza, the third line of the third stanza, and the last of the fourth. This creates a rhyme scheme of:
Abab bAba abAb babA where the capital letter signifies the repeated line.
Written in tetrameter.

The picture was taken by the Author himself.
Pays one point and 2 member cents.


Save to Bookcase Promote This Share or Bookmark
Print It Print It View Reviews

You need to login or register to write reviews. It's quick! We only ask four questions to new members.


© Copyright 2024. Treischel All rights reserved.
Treischel has granted FanStory.com, its affiliates and its syndicates non-exclusive rights to display this work.