General Poetry posted May 4, 2014


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a short poem on sadness

rainbows

by judester

Where is my sky?
That beautiful blue.
I only see beige,
the sun is gone too

A cold wind blows,
rainbows are grey.
Even the birds
don't want to stay.

This feeling of sadness,
a cover of doom.
Blanket of darkness
alone in my room.

Then a light pressure
on the top of my head.
I dry my eyes,
rise out of bed.

The sadness has passed,
there's a smile on my face.
I take a deep breath
and run from this place.





Sad Poems writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Sadness has overcome us all at one time or another. Either caused by a relative or close friend's death or from the girl or guy that broke our heart or just life in general. We all handle situations differently, some good, some bad. This contest gives us the ability to explore this. Your poem can also play into other emotions that are common to writing like this such as anger or depression.


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