Biographical Poetry posted February 3, 2014 |
Endless Error
The Wheel of Miss Fortune
by Marillion
Her wisdom carves my essence with stiletto-chiseled truth, Amid the evanescence of a still-perplexing youth. My muscle-bound demeanor is a surreptitious shield, Discreetly placed between her and my inner battlefield; But her resolve denies me all the comforts of defense, And through my walls she fries me with a battered common sense. Her wisdom cleaves my answers as we volley, tit-for-tat, Like two ambitious dancers in a lead-or-follow spat. Her hard-to-take conclusions are an iron-fisted punch, And ego-shaped contusions mark my bruises by the bunch; Yet still I kill my chances for a worthy love to heal By cheating those romances with a heart that's like a wheel. While burning hearts extinguish, I pursue another flame With subtle body English, and a darkly-earned acclaim. This wheel you spin in error is a love-benumbing ride, A self-evolving terror that deceives a hopeful bride. Her exposé destroyed it, but I salvaged every part, So scatter to avoid it when I start my spinning heart. |
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Iambic Heptameter, aka a Fourteener, with internal rhymes between the lines. I could actually break this into a 7/7 couplet with the first line iambic and the second trochaic, but chose the longer lines this time.
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