General Poetry posted January 26, 2014


Good
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
This 5-7-5 says about human Ego. I hope that you all welcome

Ego

by nivedh

Water makes a plop
When a stone is thrown on it-
Ego shows its face



5-7-5 Poetry Contest contest entry


Readers are free to criticize this poem.
They have the rights to say any change if the poem needs it.
Pays one point and 2 member cents.


Save to Bookcase Promote This Share or Bookmark
Print It View Reviews

You need to login or register to write reviews. It's quick! We only ask four questions to new members.


© Copyright 2024. nivedh All rights reserved.
nivedh has granted FanStory.com, its affiliates and its syndicates non-exclusive rights to display this work.