Satire Poetry posted December 8, 2013


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senryu--please see author notes

senryu (two clients sit)

by dejohnsrld (Debbie)

two clients sit
in therapist's waiting room
as a dozen voices chatter
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I have 19 syllables so the poet police will arrest me--maybe I should call it senryu-like?

No disrespect intended--I also have a mental illness, but if I don't laugh at it, I would cry.


senryu are 17 syllables OR LESS Need not be 5/7/5


Thanks to Wyt-tigress for the awesome artwork
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