General Poetry posted November 20, 2013


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The moments of waiting are really trying

Restless

by Waishali Deshmukh

When I wait for you

time runs slowly and dreams fly

they make me restless

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Senryu Poetry writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a senryu. Unrhymed Japanese verse of 5/7/5 syllables. Using human emotion.
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