General Poetry posted July 7, 2013


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Playful gestures of a child.......

Hiding The Remote

by harmony13

Dad is always looking for the remote
I think I'll hide it and make it a game
I will write him a treasure hunt note
I will tell him the hint is my name

I won't laugh when he asks where can it be
Pretending I have no idea it is so close
This will be so much fun I can see
Watching Dad look I like the most

He seems to be puzzled where to look
He asked me to get up to search the couch
I put the remote underneath my book
He couldn't find it and became a grouch

I decided to tell him to close his eyes
I will put the remote on his coffee mug
I will tell him he will be getting a prize
I will ask him to open his eyes; he gave me a hug





A Child's Perspective writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a poem using any form but must be 80 words or over. The topic is to use a child's perspective on something. For example, if writing about school, tell the story in the words of a child, or the way child would tell it.


The artwork is What remote? by Keri353. Thank you Keri for allowing me to use this great artwork that compliments my poem.
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