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Harem Scarem

A chapter in the book Little Poems

sedoka (private party)

by Treischel


sedoka (private party)




belligerent bird,
wing wave warns wilted welcome,
protects pond's private party.

don't stop, sorry full
daffy duck diverts, delays,
male mallard makes many mates





Sedoka Poem writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a sedoka poem. A sedoka consists of two unrhymed three-line stanzas, each with a syllable count of 5 - 7 - 7.
Often these stanzas go at the same subject from different perspectives, but that is not a requirement.


For the Contest prompt.

Private pond party, all others not welcome in bird language.

5-7-7 syllable count. two stanzas. Six lines.

The photograph is from the Author's collection.
Pays one point and 2 member cents.


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