Humor Poetry posted April 2, 2013 Chapters:  ...45 46 -47- 48... 


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A Minute Poen with closing couplet

A chapter in the book Family

Sing Song

by Treischel

Sing Song
(A Sonnet in Minute Poem)



Just listen as birds sweetly sing.
A lovely thing,
A chirp, a peep,
So smooth, so deep!

Then choirs match their voices well.
The rhythms swell,
A lovely blend
To God they send.

My voice is not as beautiful.
It's rather dull,
A croak, a howl,
And sometimes foul!

It's often mistaken for monkey's cry.
I don't know why! But, at least I do try!





Just a bit of self-deprication humor. I'm not that bad. Really!

Thought I'd try a Minute Poem, but added a closing couplet, making it a Sonnet.
The Minute Poem is a poem that follows the "8,4,4,4" syllable count structure. It usually has 3 stanzas that are exactly the same. So: 8,4,4,4; 8,4,4,4; 8,4,4,4 syllables.


A traditional Minute Poem has 12 lines total. It has 60 syllables. It is written in a strict iambic meter. The rhyme scheme is as follows: aabb, ccdd, eeff.
With the closing couplet I added, this poem has three iambic meters. The 8 count lines are in iambic tetrameter. The 4 count lines are in iambic dimeter. The rhyming closing couplet is in iambic pentameter.
By adding the closing couplet, I now have a 14 line Sonnet.

The picture is from Microsoft ClipArt. The poem origanally read "feline cry", but when I found this picture, I changed the line.
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