General Poetry posted February 17, 2013 | Chapters: | ...9 10 -11- 12... |
A Lisalet Poem about Dogs
A chapter in the book Family
Dog, Most Loyal Friend
by Treischel
Dog .... A Loyal Friend
(A Lisalet Poem) A dog is man's most loyal friend A shiny coat, a sloppy kiss A joyous greeter at day's end Protector when things go amiss A shiny coat, a sloppy kiss A dog can make you smile like this Remorseful if habits offend A dog is man's most loyal friend A joyous greeter at day's end Wags fluffy tail for emphasis That happy message it will send A shiny coat, a sloppy kiss Protector when things go amiss Barks when threatened for emphasis No matter how long it's been penned A joyous greeter at day's end A dog is man's most loyal friend |
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My dog Sativa sitting on the picnic bench, watching over the neighborhood. We had to put her to sleep after 16 Loving and Loyal years. She's been gone 3 years now.
This poem is written in Lisalet Style. This is the new 'Lisalet Style/Format' Poem, developed by "L Sherman", a member of FanStory. I'm told I'm the third poet to try it.
This style has similarities with some other styles. The repetition in this poem is all based on the opening stanza. Each successive stanza starts with the corresponding line from the first. (Second stanza starts with 2nd line of first, so on...). Also, the final line of each stanza after the first one is the line directly preceding the repeated lines. Second stanza starts with 2nd line of first stanza and ends with the line immediately above the 2nd line in the first, and so on.
The line flow is like this: 1,2,3,4 - 2,5,6,1 - 3,7,8,2 - 4,9,10,3.
There is no line count or rhyme scheme specified.
For this poem I chose a count of 8. The rhyme scheme fell out as: abab aabb abab aabb a
Picture from my personal collection. This will become one of my picture Poems.
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and 2 member cents. This poem is written in Lisalet Style. This is the new 'Lisalet Style/Format' Poem, developed by "L Sherman", a member of FanStory. I'm told I'm the third poet to try it.
This style has similarities with some other styles. The repetition in this poem is all based on the opening stanza. Each successive stanza starts with the corresponding line from the first. (Second stanza starts with 2nd line of first, so on...). Also, the final line of each stanza after the first one is the line directly preceding the repeated lines. Second stanza starts with 2nd line of first stanza and ends with the line immediately above the 2nd line in the first, and so on.
The line flow is like this: 1,2,3,4 - 2,5,6,1 - 3,7,8,2 - 4,9,10,3.
There is no line count or rhyme scheme specified.
For this poem I chose a count of 8. The rhyme scheme fell out as: abab aabb abab aabb a
Picture from my personal collection. This will become one of my picture Poems.
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