General Poetry posted February 5, 2013


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Love is a very ordinary words, but don't easy.

Velence time day

by ashimpandit

Valence time day.



Are you love me?
ask to the lover.
The lover politely told
yes, yes my darling.
Why do you love me?
how do you loves.
The lovers told
i don't know.
But the lovers told that
yes, yes i am .
I love you.
love you so much.



5-7-5 Poetry Contest contest entry


Love is come out in to the deep heart.
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