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A Diatelle
A chapter in the book Little Poems
Just GO
by Treischel
JUST GO
Go be free. You can see the world before you lose youth's early key, as all life's problems close the door with work, wife and kids, making things a chore. Later, when we know, and have all our ducks in row, seeking the big change, couple hits the floor, heads for that longed-for shining shore. At last, we're now ready! World don't ignore. Finally Free! So, we Go. |
The best times in life to see the world, are either while young before you're tied down, or after you retire.
This poem is a Diatelle.
A diatelle has a set syllable count and a set rhyme.
The syllable count is: 1-2-3-4-6-8-10-12-10-8-6-4-3-2-1,
The rhyme pattern is: abbcbccaccbcbba.It is usually displayed centered.
The photograph is mine. It's meant to convey traveling at the sunset of your life.
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and 2 member cents. This poem is a Diatelle.
A diatelle has a set syllable count and a set rhyme.
The syllable count is: 1-2-3-4-6-8-10-12-10-8-6-4-3-2-1,
The rhyme pattern is: abbcbccaccbcbba.It is usually displayed centered.
The photograph is mine. It's meant to convey traveling at the sunset of your life.
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