Fantasy Poetry posted August 13, 2012


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just an unmetered poem

Waltzing Through The Moonlight

by Jim Lorson Sr


Here we are under a star studded night
waltzing through the moonlight.
The crickets and bullfrogs in perfect musical harmony
and the fireflies create a sight for all to see.

We see the trees swaying in the gentle breeze
and we hear applause coming from their leaves.
We notice that other creatures are watching us
and how they clap and cheer in making a fuss.

We are reveling with our time in the spotlight
which raises our spirits to an even greater height.
We twirl and dance our night away
and before long the sun will rise for a new day.

The feel of her body causes my heart to race.
I know holding her puts me in another place.
I crave everything about her so very much
especially her tender and sensual touch.

Sadly, before long, this, my dream will be gone
as it will be time for a new day to dawn.
Throughout this new day I will yearn to hold her
and I will revel once again in this dream for sure.

My world becomes perfect once more after the sun sets
and my reoccurring dream is as good as it gets.




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This is composed without regards to meter. something that I do not care for. Poetry should come the poets heart and not from a metering chart. This is what makes the 'Blues' so great, straight from the heart. This does have an intentional rhyme scheme of 'aabb'.

many thanks to 'amfunny' for the use of this most perfect artwork to enhance my poem,,,,,,jim
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