General Poetry posted June 13, 2012


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Love comes out into the heart

Do you feel me and my love ?

by ashimpandit

no-1 Do you feel me
and my love?



Do you feel me
and my love ?
Yes,I love,
love your eyes
love your truth
heart and mind.
I love your name
love your game
and romantic adventure.
I love your talk
love your dream
also love your think.
I love you
and all of your life.




no-2 tears



I show water blowing
of the eyes,
I fell very sadness
in the mind.
Her eyes and tears
expose a fear,
Describe the matter of
sadness her life.
Do not end ,continue
past present future,
Her tears continue
blowing out,dear.
I pay to the God
doing end sad,
I hope happy life
comes in her.



no-3 crossing the life


How beautiful to the compare
beginning the life and after the death
to the position of earth.

How nice to the beginning
of life and more in the earth
to the sweet of movement.

How wonderful to the incoming
in the death of your life system
enable to the nature policy.



no-4 Invisible man


When I was drop in
drop in a pond,
I want totally fresh
health & mind.
Own my dry hear
Cline this time,
I walk in to village
happiness dream.

I coming own house
after the morning,
Do not see anybody
as a dark evening.
I was very triad
all so very hungry,
going in to chain room
eating some rubri(rubri is a food of bihar).

But I can not any food
keeping own my hand,
All so rules invisible
Only I man.
I understand some problem
present for me,
I was very very
invisible man.


no-5 love you


Oh
Love You
My Sweet Lover,
Own My First Girl Friend
In Village School
Day First
May.

2012
I Am Join
Comes In a Day,
I Am Comes With Father
Morning The Day
Walk in a
Office.



no-6 Fail is a Piller of Success



'How to improve and success'
ask to God ?
The king says as a spider
whose win thought .
Do you exposed the thought
is matter what ?
The king says,it is started
i am war lost .
Long long ago, when i go,
i go in a big war.
But i am lost and hungry,
mind of fare.
I am avoid the warfild
and going to hill.
I show a spider trying to
go on pill (piller).
But he was felt
again and again.
He was a success
at last then.
Then i collect some,
more some solders.
I am try more
at last winners.
The god says thank you
thank you the king.
You are a great man
and are think.



no-7 The relationship between
doctor and present



How are you,
ask doctor?
The illness present
fine doctor.
Doctor says
please sitdown.
Present told
thank you.
Please toll me
can i help you?
Doctor, i feel ...
i feel some problem!
I know , i know
but what are your problem?
Something etc
health and mind.
OK, all right
i gave prescribe.


no-8



The poor writer


Can you see a poor writers in the world ?
I show a very poor writers.
The writers was very poor and very hungry
In this work
But he can not get any success
in own literature
He is collect own write any time
and any where
And stock to the doyar in the table
again again and again more
But do not expose a time any where
in the world
One day he show this show your writing
is destroy with the rat
He is not unhappy not unhappy
progress the own literature



no-9 The burning candle


Can you see a burning candle
in the deep dark and scilentness night
I show very cold more night

As a spent of rainy day
when the frog was a calling in fild
the night was very darkness

Electici was gone,air stop
the rain all aways falls tip top
then i was feel very alone

I am feel again and again,
very fare,i am feel allso very alone
to the deep darkness night



no-10 Tip top Tip top
rainy day



Tip top Tip top
rainy day,
I love you
you are say.
Blowing water
blowing air,
I am going
in to fear.
Clouds are a
danceing movement,
I am feel
sweet present.


no-11 Tip top Tip top
rain coming



Tip top Tip top
rain coming
I am going
in the running
Air blowing
high and slow
Trees are vivet
in the row
Birds are coming
in the home
Sky and cloud
suddenly bomb(bloust)
I am enjoy
rainy days
This is like
all my best



no-12 The first side of love


Do you feel
The first side of love?
Feel the nice exprience
in own life?

Some one has own exprience
but all in nothing.
Beacouse love is a sweetness
of human life.

How beautiful the feelings,
the feelings of love?
I said very nice very nice
all so very nice




no-13 Please help me



Please give me
A one peg hot drinks?
Only one peg
Do not more then.
I feel very lonely
Very lonely own my life.
I lost my friend
My best friends.
I lost my present
My present and future.
I can't doing any work
For help my own life.
Please help me
Help me and my life.



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