General Poetry posted May 6, 2012


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Most of the fear is in the early stages.

Leave me alone. 112 words

by DALLAS01

Please don't look at me like that
I still recognize that look,
I can't help it I forget
I promise I won't try to cook.

Why did you take my car away
I want my check book back,
What's that mean evaluation?
That Dr's just a goddamn quack.

So what the sink ran over twice
your dad over reacted,
don't tell me I'm the only one
who sometimes gets distracted.

You're making me a nervous wreck
no wonder I can't think
just go on home, leave me alone
I will not go to see a shrink.







Alzheimers Poem writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Please write a RHYMED poem on the topic of Alzheimers disease, COMPLETELY from the thoughts of the sufferer. No third party observations. PLEASE FOLLOW ALL THE RULES.

NO AUTHOR NOTES WHATSOEVER
NO ARTWORK
BETWEEN 60-160 WORDS
WORD COUNT MUST BE STATED IN 'DESCRIPTION' ABOVE TITLE
Pays one point and 2 member cents.


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