General Poetry posted January 7, 2012


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The night is almost perfect - but not quite.

While A Winter Storm Passes Outside

by VinnyCasso

Betrayal Contest Winner 

  
     I sit up in bed wide awake watching you sleep
     beside me in the dimly lit room.
 
     Comforted as always by the steady rhythm
     of your breathing, I am remembering unhappy
     times before you when I sat alone on winter
     nights waiting for someone else, not knowing
     he lay in other arms.
 
     Loving your face, I let my eyes caress
     your forehead— traveling downward over
     broad shoulders and strong muscled arms.
 
     The hall light’s reflection catches the gleam
     of the golden wedding band you have
     promised to wear and honor forever.
 
     After all these years, my heart still stirs at
     the familiar lines of your body outlined
     beneath the sheets.
 
     Midnight snowflakes are quiet outside the
     bedroom window while minutes change
     soundlessly on the nightstand’s digital clock.
     Reaching out, I shut off the alarm
 
     before it shatters the silence of the almost
     perfect moment, but soon I must wake you
     and send you home to someone else.




Writing Prompt
Write a poem in any form or style with Betrayal as the central theme.

Betrayal
Contest Winner


Thank you, Ken Harrish, for the use of 'Ice On My Window.'
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