Spiritual Poetry posted January 11, 2011

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A naani poem

Last Breath

by jmshumate

Gently lying down,
spirit leaving by the sound.
Sinking very deep,
into God's eternal sleep.

Naani Poem writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a Naani poem. A Naani consists of 4 lines, the total lines consists of 20 to 25 syllables.


A poem about the breath of life, returning to God, when ones time is done on this Earth.
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