General Poetry posted June 5, 2010


Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level
the abuse she hides from the world

In Silence She Suffers

by Sandy P.

Feelings Contest Winner 
Her
Broken
Body bruised
Shattered and used
A life discarded
Wholly disregarded
Blackened, swollen eyes pleading
Lying motionless and bleeding
"Bitch, look what you made me do," he screams
Savage, brutal blows crush her dying dreams



Writing Prompt
Write a poem sharing an emotional feeling about something such as: life, death, war, injustice, marriage,loneliness, loss, hope, laughter, or a subject that might not be listed. Express an emotion such as fear, anxiety, love, hate, disgust, indifference, etc.

Feelings
Contest Winner

Recognized


This form is called a Etheree Poem - 10 lines beginning with (1) syllable and ending with (10). The prompt instructions were to write about feelings and I chose to write about the agony of abuse that is, unfortunately, rampant in our society today. Sincere thanks to Robotkin for the amazing artwork.
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