Romance Fiction posted January 10, 2010


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As I read the prompt I felt that I would differ.

An Angel Descended

by knowledge


Did you ever think that your destiny would be connected with a shopping cart?  Mine was.  While taking a journey through our neighborhood grocery store, I fell in love.  Yep, that is right, in a very short period of time, I fell in love.  These feelings just welled up from within my heart in a rush of emotion. 


At the check stand I was looking into the most beautiful eyes I had ever seen.  Big sea-green orbs; absolute soul mate love flowed from them into mine.  It was like a cord of communication was established between us in an instant.  An angel had descended from heaven.


As I stood there with my shopping cart, I realized the luscious mouth below those expressive eyes was softly addressing me, “…sir, would you like to check out now?”  I nodded my head and began absentmindedly setting the contents of my cart on the moving belt as I gazed at this lovely angel that was surrounded by a glowing red hallo of hair.


I noticed that she wore no wedding ring on her soft hand as she checked the articles.  I didn’t want to commit the sin of coveting someone’s wife.  I pursued,woed, persuaded; now she wears my ring.




200 Word Flash Fiction writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a story that is between 200 - 210 words. The trick is you must use the following words: destiny - feelings - cart- journey - period - cord - sin. Words may be used in different formats (for example: feelings or feelings)

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Because of the season I think that the prompt was to be a Christmas post but I chose to be different. Thanks to cynthiab for the great art work. The contest seven words are: destiny, cart, journey, period, feelings, cord, sin.
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