Mystery and Crime Fiction posted July 4, 2025 Chapters: -1- 


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A phoned confession forces SGT, Bower into a deadly game.
A chapter in the book Murderer's Mockery

Heinous Acts

by Mistydawn




Background
In the quiet town of Berryville, a cunning serial killer is on the loose, leaving a trail of terror and death in his wake while tormenting the police with his deadly games.

The early morning sun shines brightly through the small eastern window, casting a warm glow across the crowded room. Sergeant Bower, a seasoned detective with a reputation for being one of the best in her field, sits hunched over an old file at her desk. Her brow furrows as she meticulously reviews the notes. It's an abduction case that's haunted her for years. It was the first unsolved case of her career. It was a blemish on her otherwise impeccable record. Determined to find the missing piece, she sifts through the evidence again. 

The kidnapping occurred late Halloween night 2014. A distraught parent calls them, saying someone has taken their young child from their home. The detectives investigate but can't find any evidence, witnesses, or leads, causing the case to go cold quickly.

Two months later, the detectives find the child's body in a shallow grave wearing the same pink, frilly princess costume she wore the night of her kidnapping. Rachel stores the case in her bottom drawer, promising to return to it every chance she gets.

 Now I see why we didn't solve this case. She recalls the tip line bringing out all the crazies but not a single lead as she drains the last of the bitter liquid from her cup.

Guess I could re-interview everyone to see if they remember something new? She pushes away from her desk. Rachel is scooping up her gear when the phone rings. "Sergeant Bower." 

Just the person I was hoping for," A synthesized voice echoes over the phone.

"How can I help you?"

"I want to confess to a crime. A murder, to be precise." 

Rolling her eyes, Rachel plops back down at her desk. The homeless are always confessing to something, figuring it'd give them three hots and a cot, temporarily anyway. Extreme weather changes exacerbate the calls. Shifting in her chair, she impatiently says, "It'd be better if you confessed in person."

"I'm not ready to turn myself in just yet, sergeant. No, I have unfinished business to attend to. It's something that I've been meaning to do for quite some time."

Rolling her eyes, she scoots her notebook closer and asks, "Who am I talking to, and when did it occur?"

"I won't give you my name, but I will tell you this."

Rachel shifts in her chair. "I'm listening." She presses the phone to her ear, hoping to pick up on background noise. Not hearing anything, she turns up the volume and tries again. There's a faint echo when he speaks, but not much else.

"Oh, By the way, your hubby and kids are fine. You left in such a hurry this morning that you didn't even kiss them goodbye." 

Thinking he's spying on her at home, her safe haven, makes Rachel uneasy. She glances around the station to find it's deserted. "Are you going to tell me or not?"

"I'll tell you in due time. Now where was I? Oh yes, we were talking about your lovely family and how you put your work before them. I suppose we could blame your dad for that, being the workaholic that he is. How is the DA, by the way? The silence is probably hard on him, having all his girls grown and gone."

"Either tell me what you did, or I'm hanging up." 

"You've made significant progress in your career, Pipsqueak. "I'm proud of you for that. I'm sure your father is too."

Pipsqueak, that's what Mama used to call me when I was young. Rachel scribbles Mama's former lovers in her notebook. 

"Everyone should admire you, coming up from nothing, rising above it all the way you did. Your cousin, on the other hand, is following in your mother's footsteps, which is quite a shame, such a waste of life, but you couldn't pull her out of that lifestyle no matter how hard you tried."

"Emma has a mental illness and needs professional help."

"Indeed, she does. I could tell that by watching you two play when you were young."

"So, you were around us when we were growing up?" Rachel asks, hoping he'd say something that would give him away.

"It broke my heart to see you three struggle. Then losing your place on top of all of that was such a tragedy. I and a few others offered to help you guys out, but Jeanie, being the proud woman she is, said she didn't need our charity. A few weeks later, Jeanie is dead, and you girls are in DFS custody." 

 He doesn't know Jeanie's death is a hoax. She writes that in her book. Her mother decided to fake her death to save them from the gang.

"Well, enough about the past; let's get back to the crime at hand, shall we?"

"The murder you committed?"

"Correct?"

"When did you commit this heinous act?"

"Heinous act, I like that." He chuckles.

"When?" Rachel presses, tiring of his game. 

"She took her last breath as the sun came up in the morning." 

"Where is the victim located?"

"You know that rundown factory on Freeman Street?"

Rachel pictures the street in her mind and asks, "The old Tyson plant?" Tyson's was a chicken factory that employed most of the Berryville residents at one time or another. The pay and the benefits are top-notch, but working without a day off for months is more than most people can handle.

"Yes. And she's someone you've been searching for for years."

Rachel quickly reviews cold cases in her mind. Not coming up with anything, she asks, "Can you give me a name?" 

"You're a smart girl, Sergeant; you'll figure it out. Well, it's been wonderful chatting with you, catching up, and all, but I really must go. Duty calls, you know." 

"Wait, I…" The call disconnects. 

Hanging up the phone, the sergeant glances over to find two rookies stepping through the door. Walking over, she says, "You two are working with me today. So, grab your gear and let's go." 

The sergeant fills the rookies in on the phone call and alleged murder on their way across town, leaving out the part about the killer having ties to her past. She knows the connection will come out eventually. But for now, it's better if they didn't know, not until she can get a grip on it herself.

The old chicken plant is now a relic of a bygone era. Its once bustling halls now sit eerily quiet. The exterior walls are now chipped and faded. Weeds and wildflowers now make up the once well-traveled path leading to the main entrance. Disheartened, the sergeant climbs out of her car. 

A couple of beat cops are at the factory when the trio arrives. "We secured the place like you said," the younger of the two reports.

"Pointing to a rotting pole, Rachel says, 'Check the cameras, and question the neighbors to see if they saw anything.'" Turning, she motions to the rookies. "You two follow me."

They reach the front to find the door had been recently jimmied. Taking her gun from her holster, she glances towards the newbies. They nervously follow suit. "Ready?" 

They glance at each other and nod. 

 "Let's go." Stepping through the door, she motions for them to spread out. 

The air is thick, smelling of decay and dust. Layers of grime now cover the once sparkling machines. Small rays of sunshine pierce through the empty darkness, illuminating the reminiscence of a once thriving factory. 

"Clear," Rachel hears as she continues to scan her side of the building. "Clear," she repeats, lowering her weapon. She heads toward the door.

"I found something, Sergeant," the third cop says. 

She steps closer to find the officer bent over a bloody body in plain sight. 

Glancing up, the rookie says, "The body is still warm, and she doesn't have an ID."

At this angle, it looked as if the twenty something victim were sleeping with her arms crosswise on her chest, and her head slumped to one side. The sergeant narrows her eyes. No blood indicates that this is staged. 



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