General Poetry posted June 19, 2025


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Hope is a thing with feathers, Emily Dickinson.

The Grave of Dreams

by papa55mike

between a man's tears and desperation
lies a bleak world deep within an empty hole
the pain of his dying dream creates total separation
his lost vision permeates the very depths of his soul
 
standing with an empty crowd by the grave
his shoes kick some soil into the distant land
he feels the emptiness of dreams nobody could save
it drains his life like falling grains of sand
 
bits of the man's existence propel toward its destiny
soil and stone batter the falling spirit of hope
deep into the darkness of anguish and futility
leaving behind a dreamless mind, unable to cope
 
until the man's eyes catch a glimpse of light
and on new feathers, his spirit takes flight




Many thanks for stopping by to read!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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